A lot of people have been asking me for sample case notes and I’m pleased to say I have now written some! I have done my best to make these notes as realistic as possible and they (like the official samples) are not designed to be easy! This is of course a completely fictional patient and doctor. Please let me know what you think in the comments!
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WRITING SUB-TEST: MEDICINE
TIME ALLOWED: READING TIME: 5 MINUTES
WRITING TIME: 40 MINUTES
Read the case notes and complete the writing task which follows.
Miss Maryam Hassan is a patient in your general practice who is concerned about poor sleep.
PATIENT DETAILS:
Name: Miss Maryam Hassan
DOB: 27.05.89 (Age 29)
Address: 42 West Street, Easthampton
Social background:
Single, no children
Works in fashion design, sometimes has to work long hours
Family history:
Mother died aged 63 due to traffic accident
Father fit and well
Maternal Grandmother diabetes ?Type 2
Nil else significant
Medical history:
Nil significant
Appendicectomy aged 12 (in France)
Allergic to latex
Never smoked, nil alcohol
Goes to gym 3x per week
Current Drugs:
OTC vitamin D
No other prescribed, OTC, or recreational
27/02/19
Discussion:
Concerned re: poor sleeping. Requested sleeping tablet.
Poor sleep hygiene and recent stress at work discussed. Long time at computer in evenings
Occasional headaches and dry eyes after computer use
Slight weight loss (2kg over 2 months, puts down to recent gym membership)
No concerning features of headaches
O/E: Full physical exam: NAD
Weight 62kg, Height 174cm BMI 20.5
BP 125/82
RR 18, HR 85 bpm
Advised sleep hygiene, reduced screen time in evening, reduce caffeine. Advised risks>benefits for sleeping tablet. For review in 2 weeks if not better. Advised OTC artificial tears prn
13/03/19
Worsening sleeping pattern, despite improved sleep hygiene and cessation of caffeine. Has noted occasional palpitations.
Dry eye sensation worsening, although some temporary relief with OTC drops,
O/E: eyes NAD
BP 132/89
RR18, HR 92 bpm (regular)
ECG today: NSR at 88 bpm
Pathology requested: Full profile, TSH. 24 hour ecg,
Review 2 weeks
18/03/19
Pathology report received: TSH 0.3 (low). FBC, U&E, creatinine within normal range. Pt phoned to come in. 24 hour ECG results pending
20/03/19
Pathology report reviewed with Miss Hassan
Symptoms no better.
Advised possible diagnosis of hyperthyroidism and need for specialist referral
Concerned around future fertility, wants to start a family in a few years, advised will need to await investigations
Writing Task:
Using the information in the case notes, write a letter of referral to Dr Dalfo, an endocrinologist at City Hospital, for additional investigations and management.
Address the letter to Dr Pilar Dalfo, Endocrinologist, City Hospital, Easthampton.
In your answer:
● Expand the relevant notes into complete sentences
● Do not use note form
● Use letter format
The body of the letter should be approximately 180–200 words
Sample Answer
Dr Pilar Dalfo
City Hospital
Newtown
20.03.19
Dear Dr Dalfo,
Re: Miss Maryam Hassan DOB: 27.05.89
I am writing to refer this 29 year old patient, with symptoms and preliminary investigations suggestive of hyperthyroidism, for specialist assessment.
Miss Hassan initially presented on 27th February 2019 with poor sleep, dry eyes and occasional benign headaches. Recent weight loss was noted at this appointment (2kg in 2 months) although this coincided with a recent increase in exercise. Her BMI, physical examination and vital signs were all normal. She was advised on sleep hygiene measures and simple eye drops.
Miss Hassan re-attended on 13th March with worsening symptoms and new onset palpitations. Her heart rate was 92 and her ECG was normal. Blood investigations confirmed a TSH of 0.3 (other investigations normal). The results of a 24 hour ECG are pending.
I discussed the potential diagnosis of hyperthyroidism with Miss Hassan today. Of note, she advised she would like to start a family in the future. Miss Hassan is generally well, takes only over the counter vitamin D and is allergic to latex. Her only family history is that of diabetes in her maternal grandmother.
It would be appreciated if you could review Miss Hassan, arrange further investigations as necessary and give advice regarding both further management and implications for fertility. Should you have any further questions please do not hesitate to contact me.
Yours Sincerely
Doctor
Disclaimer:
These case notes and sample letter are intended purely for educational use and do not constitute medical advice. They were written to help candidates in their preparation for the Occupational English Test and are designed to be as close to what may appear in the actual test as possible. However, these are not official materials from the Occupational English Test and therefore their similarity to the actual examination cannot be guaranteed.
Thank you very much
love you hannah all the way from pakistan, you are doing wonderful job keep it up
Doctor from the United Stated of America here. The English used in this sample letter is certainly adequate but no native speaker would write like this. As a doctor , when I send a referral letter to a specialist I make sure to use the most appropriate grammar and choice of words. If you want to seem like a native English speaker and write a perfect letter, do not replicate this sample.
dr. D
No respectful American would address themselves as “Doctor from the United States of America.” What on earth did I just read?
Hi Hannah ,i hope you are well.you are doing great .please i want more examples ,this is so helpful
Hello. Is it possible to provide case notes and sample letters for dentistry?
Thank you for your effort.
Hi Dr hannah
You are doing a great job by making such an excellent and helpful videos and material for OET exams.
I hope for you great success in your life.
With all my love.
Thanks 🌹
Hi Hanna. You are doing a great job. I have gone through all of your videos. You must share more
Thank you so much, I am trying to make more! I appreciate your support 🙂
Hello Hannah, Hope you are doing well, that was quite useful and could you please share another sample for doctors.
Hi! Thank you! I will try to write more soon
Could you supply more notes.
This was quite good.
Many thanks! I do plan on writing more 🙂
Good example.
Very useful. Can you please write a sample letter for emergency referral (medicine). Specifically, illustrate where to include relevant past medical history.
Also, can I write past medical history beside the DOB?
For Example:
” Re: Mrs. Julia Martin,
DOB: 13/01/1960, widow, lives alone, Diabetic, Obese”
Hi! I will try to write more, I will try to include an emergency letter in future samples.
With regards to past medical history, in real life we would often write this in bullet points under the DOB. However for OET the PMHx MUST be written in full sentences as part of the letter.
very helpful…. thanks
Thanks. Useful, organized and skilled tutor.
Thank you so much!
Thank you so much Doctor Hannah, very useful i like your videos …wich you all the best 👍👍👍
Thank you so mch doctor Hannah, very useful i like your videos …wich you all the best 👍👍👍
Thanks!
Very useful madam
thanks so much!
Your teaching is amazing😍
Thank you Doc Hannah👍
Thank you!!
mam please send some letter for nurses
Thanks! I will try to write one in the future, best of luck with your studies!
Thank you doctor… Its very useful for healthcare professionals. If you don’t mind please provide a sample case note with a sample letter for nurses.
Thanks Mariam! I will try to make some material for nurses in the future 🙂